Wednesday, October 9, 2013

Narrative Paragraph, Billy Jones

Billy Jones was a strong, outgoing young man. Sometimes Billy would run up, hug a random person he did not know, and compliment their hair just to brighten their day. Billy was the star point guard for the senior basketball team of his high school. With quick feet, swift moves, and the most precise chest pass in the league Billy Jones lead his team to become zone champions. Although Billy was a very confident young man with a great social and physical life, you could tell he had some family issues and a rough time figuring out his self identity. Billy would walk the streets in the evening and come home later that night just so could get out of the way of the gruesome, loud, angry fights that his parents would have with him daily. He would always wear different outfits to school and always had interest in the art classes his school offered. He was far too committed to basketball and his friends to look into what he liked best.


Direct: strong, outgoing young man. Quick feet, swift moves, and the most precise chest pass

Indirect: Actions, he would run up, hug a random person and compliment their hair. Billy would walk the streets at night to get away from fighting. Change his clothes and wonder about art.


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